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Wednesday, 31 August 2016

The Red Pen

THE RED PEN

Im looking down the 
barrels of the red pen,
its holes 

fat as bolders,
light as feather,
red as stawberrys,

they are
dark red funnels,
skinny tunnels,
circle shaped pot holes,

The red pen shoots ink
on my page.





                               

3 comments:

  1. nice work but what does the red pen shoots ink on my page mean

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  2. Great work but try tell us more imformation about the end

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  3. Great experimenting with using simile and metaphor, Leshidus.

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